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i have a shit loud of art books to draw in and i was drawing to of my kaijuOc (i guess) fighting. and in a way trying to do world and environment.
Image size
552x697px 222.19 KB
Make
Intel Corporation
Model
UNI_M1040
Shutter Speed
1/10 second
Aperture
F/2.4
Focal Length
100 mm
ISO Speed
268
Date Taken
Jun 21, 2017, 4:04:57 PM
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Hey, responding to your request for critique!
You've got some neat creature designs here, especially Neptune! Really digging the petal-like extensions on the back and the way the snout crests mirror that shape. What I like best about this image, though, is that it's a complete scene. The characters look active and there's a clear foreground and background, so you get a sense of scale and depth from the image. From a technical perspective this is a lot more advanced than anything else I've seen from you. It looks great.
As for suggestions on how to improve it, the first thing I'd point out would be the trees. They're very much the standard, cartoon representation of what a tree looks like, compared to something that actually represents what you see. I know foliage can be really daunting when most of your experience is with creatures, trust me, but just gather up some references or better yet go outside and study the trees around where you live. I think you'll see a huge improvement. The second thing I'd bring up is the difference in size, because while I appreciate the attempt at perspective, I think you might have overshot it just a little bit. If these two are close enough that they're about to clash then Rough should probably be smaller, assuming the two are similarly sized.
You've got some neat creature designs here, especially Neptune! Really digging the petal-like extensions on the back and the way the snout crests mirror that shape. What I like best about this image, though, is that it's a complete scene. The characters look active and there's a clear foreground and background, so you get a sense of scale and depth from the image. From a technical perspective this is a lot more advanced than anything else I've seen from you. It looks great.
As for suggestions on how to improve it, the first thing I'd point out would be the trees. They're very much the standard, cartoon representation of what a tree looks like, compared to something that actually represents what you see. I know foliage can be really daunting when most of your experience is with creatures, trust me, but just gather up some references or better yet go outside and study the trees around where you live. I think you'll see a huge improvement. The second thing I'd bring up is the difference in size, because while I appreciate the attempt at perspective, I think you might have overshot it just a little bit. If these two are close enough that they're about to clash then Rough should probably be smaller, assuming the two are similarly sized.